Link to elevator pitch: https://youtu.be/n5r5zT_r5yM
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Assignment 30A- Final Reflection
· What stood out to me most for this class was that we actually had to interview people. When I read the first assignmen...
Hi Kaitlin,
ReplyDeleteJust a little feedback on your elevator pitch. As you are standing a little far back it is quite difficult to hear what you are saying. Your elevator pitch would be more effective if you project your voice in a loud energetic enthusiastic voice. Secondly, it may look more professional if you wear business professional clothing. This was also one of the areas I could have improved on in my elevator pitch. Your elevator pitch is also a little less than 90 seconds but overall good effort and I enjoyed listening to your proposition.
Hi Kaitlin,
ReplyDeleteGreat job on your elevator pitch! I thought you did a nice job especially when you incorporated crucial information to really inform your audience on the importance of your opportunity. I also agree with Jade when she said how you are a little too far back as it makes a little difficult to hear you. Overall, good job! I enjoyed listening to your pitch.
Hi Kaitlin,
ReplyDeleteI thought you did a great job identifying a crucial opportunity that can be met in today's society as you discussed the importance of implementing a psychological test for firearm protection. I found the statistics you chose to discuss very interesting as they supported your opportunity very well. I think you did a great job of using hand gestures and emotion to engage your audience as your different tones make it easier to grasp the importance of your message. Overall good job on your pitch!