Reflection:
2. When looking at my my feedback one of the very
important comments was that I was standing a bit too far so my voice wasn’t as
clear or loud as I would have liked it to be. One commented how my emotion and
hand gestures were effected so I was sure to continue those aspects into my
second elevator pitch
3. Based on my feedback, I made sure I stood at a
distance where the audience could hear me clearly, yet still see my body
movements. I also added more vital information to try to reach closer to that full
90 seconds to really give the audience the full idea of my service.
Hi Kaitlin,
ReplyDeleteFirstly I would like to say great work on your second elevator pitch. I really do believe practice makes perfect, so it can only get better! The improvements and changes you have made are noticeable and a little goes a long way. These little changes have made a big difference to your elevator pitch in terms of getting it just right. Its nice you see you made your pitch a little longer - like you said, it gives viewers a better idea of what your service entails. Nice job!
Hi Kaitlin,
ReplyDeleteGreat job on your second elevator pitch, it is very obvious that you worked hard to improve it the second time around. It truly makes a big difference when you stand closer to the camera are able to project your voice more nicely. I also thought you did a nice job at introducing and selling your service throughout your pitch.
Hi Kaitlin,
ReplyDeleteI think you did a terrific job on your second elevator pitch and included numerous modifications that made the overall presentation better. For this elevator pitch I was able to hear you much more clearly and I also agree that making your video a little bit longer to reach the 90 seconds mark gave you more time to further explain core features of your product/service. Great job!